Thursday, May 10, 2018

The Omega's Challenge by Colbie Dunbar




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I found this story to be okay.  Not great, not bad.  But okay.

Liam and Jake meet during a treasure hunt.   When they have to split the prize, neither are happy.  The attraction is there though.   Things aren't easy though.   Liam wants to push Jake away.   After marking Jake, Liam doesn't know how to tell Jake that he can't be with him.  He felt guilty, but Liam left to avoid having to explain thing to Liam.  More than a month goes by and Liam cannot stop thinking about Jake.  Liam was torn - make things work out or let it go down as just a mistake. His life was complicated enough and he just didn't want a mate.  But then Jake shows up to see Liam and things are about to change.

The story was short and thus there wasn't a lot of character development.  And then it ends with a cliff-hanger, never letting the reader really know what their past issues are.   I would have liked it better if it was longer, more developed, and didn't end when it did.





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